I'm going to post it anyway, for lack of anything else to post. Ok everyone, the following poem is untitled as of yet. That's just a clue to how new it is lol. (Edit: I have come up with a name now, I've added it in at the top of the poem)Don't expect it to stay the same from now and say 2 weeks from now. But hey, at least you all get to see the start of the editing process...that's good, right? Anyhow, Enjoy!


Bundle

Feeling disparate
A mountain peak
Smallest in a range
Of giants
Noted only for
It’s deficiency

Hollow certitude
Playing the role
Of one unspent
A last grasp
At being so
So refined

Ungathered fruit
In redundant error
A foiled sunset
Stop and look
Criticism therein
A descent finalized

Quick come and see
Transparent thought
So patently oblivious
On a pedestal
Held by the inane
What an accomplishment

Lacking wisdom
Courage, Constitution
Exhibit A, please
Welcome to the fold
Such a fine way
To achieve nothing


~K